Wednesday, August 20, 2014

ALOTT5MA FRIDAY GRAMMAR RODEO WEDNESDAY WELLFLEET DANGLING MODIFIER INTERLUDE:  I'd probably have rewritten this lede in today's Cape Cod Times:
Friends and co-workers remembered a North Eastham woman killed Tuesday in a three-vehicle crash on Route 6 for her laughter and generosity.
Posted by Adam at 11:23 AM

5 comments:

  1. Randy11:52 AM

    Finn recommending MORE commas? Has the world spun off its axis?

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  2. Jim Bell12:38 PM

    I think it's two sentences.

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  3. Matt1:13 PM

    #waroncommas

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  4. Meghan4:30 PM

    I was thinking commas would make all the difference too.

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  5. Benner8:35 PM

    In Massachusetts, it's possible . . .

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